Laura Bennett woke to the sharp smell of disinfectant burning her throat and a pain in her left side that felt like something vital had been carved out of her body. For several disoriented seconds, she couldn’t remember where she was or why every breath sent fire through her ribs. Then memory returned in a crushing wave: the hospital, the surgery, the kidney she’d given to save her mother-in-law’s life.
She turned her head slowly, expecting to see the private recovery room her husband Paul had promised—soft lighting, attentive nurses, maybe even flowers.
Instead, she found herself in what looked like a storage ward that had been hastily converted for patients. The walls were stained with water damage, a cracked clock ticked loudly above the door, and through a thin curtain she could hear someone coughing violently in the next bed.
A plastic cup of lukewarm water sat on a metal tray beside her, and when she tried to reach for the call button, her arm trembled so badly she could barely move it. Fear settled into her chest—not the fear of physical pain, though that was considerable, but the deeper fear of being alone in a moment when she needed someone most.
She’d given up a piece of herself for this family, and now she was waking up in a room that looked like it had been forgotten.
The door opened, and for one hopeful moment, Laura thought it might be a nurse coming to check on her. Instead, Paul Bennett walked in, and everything about him was wrong. He wasn’t wearing the worried expression she’d imagined, the grateful tears, the gentle touch of a husband who’d just watched his wife sacrifice her own health.
He was dressed in a crisp suit with his hair perfectly styled, looking like a man heading to a business meeting rather than visiting his wife after major surgery.
Behind him came Dorothy Bennett in a wheelchair, and beside Paul stood a woman Laura had seen before at company functions—Vanessa Cole, beautiful and polished in a red dress that seemed deliberately chosen to announce victory. Laura swallowed against the dryness in her throat, trying to make sense of what she was seeing.
“Paul,” she whispered, her voice barely audible. “Did it work?
Did your mother get the kidney?”
Paul walked closer and dropped a thick envelope onto Laura’s chest.
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